I've decided to post this as I write it, and plan on being done in the next few days. So you can either wait and read it all at once, or read it in these installments. Heres the first chunk of it. Let me know what you think! Feedback is always appreciated, even if you hate it!
ps, I haven't edited it or anything, this is literally as I write it.
The Wicked Face
Matthew Ashcraft
Standing in his driveway at one thirteen in the morning, Sam Reed felt shivers slide along his spine. They dripped slowly down, like a congealed liquid, clinging onto the bone, fighting gravity. Then they easily ran back back up, to repeat the process. Was it the cold, which, on this November night, was heavy and constricting? His lungs worked harder to pump a mist of breath from his mouth, which hung in the air before him, partially obstructing his view of his car. I've got to start warming the car up Sam thought to himself as his feet crunched on his gravel driveway. Sam lived in Loveland, Ohio, forty minutes or so from downtown Cincinnati. His home was mid sized and white, built in the nineteen forties, but renovated shortly before he and his wife had bought it, ten years ago. His wife, Cynthia, had been pregnant at the time with Megan, and the apartment they had first moved into after their marriage seemed suddenly, too claustrophobic and small when a crib had been introduced, and then a changing table, dressers, clothes and toys, and all of the things they had received at the baby shower. They had found this house in Loveland, and it was perfect for them. To the East, fields for as long as you could see, until they dipped slightly, rolling down over the horizon to the large home of the family that owned them. West, about half a football field away, the Reeds only close neighbors. A grand three story house painted a soft blue, like a robin's egg shell. An elderly couple lived there, Elliot and Clara Walters. They were in their seventies, retired and hating it, two cats and a small dog filling a small part of the void left to parents who had had ten children, none of whom lived closer than a seven hour drive. Across the street from the Reeds residence, more of those glorious fields.. Behind the house, a few acres of short green grass, which gave way to woods, nothing but dark and twisted shapes here so early in the morning. Sam had an obscene image flash behind his eyes as he opened his car door, looking back at the woods. For a second, the trees were like fingers, crippled and clawed, reaching up, out of the ground, as if to tear heaven from the skies.
Sam was middle management for a trucking company. He, had his own office with a nice view of the parking lot, and had seven people who answered to him. He made good money, His wife worked from home, a few hours a day, writing articles for a website. They had never exactly struggled. Until this year. The trucking industry was one of the hardest hit because of the economy, and as Christmas neared, Sam had taken a job at a major retail chain doing part time overnight stocking. On days he worked his night job, he would go to sleep as soon as he got home from his day job, around six or so. He awoke at midnight, showered, at a quick meal, and was pulling out of his driveway around one fifteen, a duffel bag with business casual clothes to change into at the office on the passenger seat beside him. He worked until six in the morning, and then went straight over to the office.
The car dipped to the right side slightly as Sam backed out onto the road, missing the last inch or so of his driveway catching the lip of the ditch in his yard. His headlights swung across his side yard, running along the grass like a spreading flame, meeting the side of the Walters home, and climbing along the paneling. The lights hit a kitchen window, and for a second, Sam was looking straight at the face of a man. The lights hadn't just plunged through the window, clearly showcasing the small cuckoo clock hanging opposite on the wall, as they normally did. In fact, he hadn't seen the clock at all, with it's small waving bar, ticking away the minutes until dawn. No, this time, the lights had illuminated a face, one that Sam was sure didn't belong to Elliot or Clara. It was a strange face, a pale face, a wicked face. Sam blinked, from surprise, and when his eyes opened again in no time at all, the face was gone. Sam sat in the middle of the road, his car diagonally across both lanes, the headlights still spilling intrusively into his neighbors kitchen. Sam sat a long time, not sure of what he had seen. Should he do something? Should he go over and check if his kindly old neighbors were being robbed? Should he call the police? Sitting in the cold, the engine idly pumping visible exhaust into the air, Sam decided he hadn't seen what he thought he had, and he drove on down the street.
*
The store Sam worked at at night had locks on a timer. They would not open until five minutes before two, and it was ten minutes before two now, and he had to sit in his car, waiting to get in. He had driven without the radio on, something very rare for him. He had thought of nothing but that face, with it's cold dark eyes, brows slanting down on top of them, two small dark snakes on an otherwise white background. The lips were turned downwards in a frown, no more like a snarl. “This is ridiculous!” Sam spoke aloud to himself, fingers finding the dial to the heater and turning it a few clicks down. There was no way Sam could have seen the face that clearly, no way he could have seen the position of the eyebrows, what sort of emotion the face displayed. There was no way of telling if it hadn't been either one of this neighbors. Or even if the face had been there at all. But It had been, and it had been a terrible, wicked, and deadly face. Sam knew it.
“Hey Sam.” Nathanial stood in front of the time clock, carefully punching his numbers in as Sam stepped by him.
“Hey.” Sam slid his coat off his shoulders and hung it on a hanger on the rack. He turned to Nathanial. 'What's going on?”
“Not much, had a hell of a test today, I'm beginning to rethink this whole college thing.”
“I had plenty of those days too.” Sam grinned as he moved to the time clock. “But look at me now.”
What Sam, Nathanial, and twenty or so other two a. m. folk did was empty a truck every night. A truck only arrived two or three days a week in most months, but every day but Sunday the week of Thanksgiving until Christmas. Two people would enter the truck, lifting them to a long line made up of rollers. The boxes were slid down and placed onto various skids. As skids reached their maximum height, “bowlers” took them to the floor and bowled them out. This consisted of finding the correct aisle from the label and sliding them down to the correct section of shelf space. After all of this, the rest of their work time was taken up by moving through the sections of the store, one person to an aisle, and putting the product on the shelves.
The team stocked in the small grocery aisles, Sam kneeling in front of the cooler, pulling out bottles of orange juice, sliding the ones with a further sell by date in, and then replacing the removed ones. He stood and stepped back, letting he door swing shut on it's hinges. Sam gasped and jerked away from the door. He spun quickly around, looking back into an aisle. He had sworn he saw the wicked face, leering behind him, reflected in the glass door. “What's the matter?” Gus spoke, an older man working in the aisle.
“Nothing.” Sam answered, tossing the cardboard box the orange juice had come in in his trash cart. Gus shrugged and stood, Sam unable to tell if the groan that came from Gus was from, his mouth or his knees. Sam turned back to the cooler, eyes scanning for the face. He put a hand to his face, and was startled to find he was sweating. His fingers came back slick and warm, and he wiped them off on his pants. He left his trash cart along the cooler and made his way to the bathroom. After making sure the door was locked, Sam stepped to the sink, hesitantly. He felt foolish when he realized he moved so slowly because he was half sure he would see the face reflected in the mirror, peering over his shoulder. The mirror was empty, besides Sam's own face, red and wet, making Sam absurdly picture a tomato, sprinkled with a morning rain, set atop his shoulders. Sam turned the faucet on, keeping the water cool, letting it flow over his palms and fingers for a moment before forming his hands into a diamond shaped bowl. He leaned forward and splashed the water onto his face. Sam stayed bent, turning the water off and held his eyes closed as the waters streamed from his face at first, and then lessened to droplets, pattering against the porcelain. Sam remained stooped, even after no more drops fell from his skin. He kept his eyes closed. Once again, he was sure that, as he stood up, in the mirror the wicked face would greet him. Sam took a deep breath and straightened up. He opened his eyes. Nothing.
Sam got through the rest of his late shift without seeing the face in anything other than his mind. It was never far from there. He thought of it as he stocked, he thought of it as he folded boxes down and slid them into the baler, he thought of it on his break. Every minute he was thinking of that face. Of that pale, terrible face. Sam changed for his day job in the office bathroom, carefully avoiding looking into the mirror. He stepped from the bathroom with the duffel slung over one shoulder. The office was dark, and empty. The only light came from a few computers in various cubicles, whose screens burned with that somehow bright black. A few people always forgot to turn their monitors off. Sam was an hour early on days he worked his night job, but what was the point of going home if he had to turn around and go right back out again? He walked to his office, unlocking it and letting himself in. He left the door open, fingers finding the light switch and flipping it up. He barely heard that soft buzz as the fluorescents kicked on, and it seemed his eyes were more accustomed to their harsh glow than a natural one. Sam dropped his duffel in the corner behind his desk and sat down, rubbing his eyes with his knuckles. He turned on his computer, and got to work.
*
ps, I haven't edited it or anything, this is literally as I write it.
The Wicked Face
Matthew Ashcraft
Standing in his driveway at one thirteen in the morning, Sam Reed felt shivers slide along his spine. They dripped slowly down, like a congealed liquid, clinging onto the bone, fighting gravity. Then they easily ran back back up, to repeat the process. Was it the cold, which, on this November night, was heavy and constricting? His lungs worked harder to pump a mist of breath from his mouth, which hung in the air before him, partially obstructing his view of his car. I've got to start warming the car up Sam thought to himself as his feet crunched on his gravel driveway. Sam lived in Loveland, Ohio, forty minutes or so from downtown Cincinnati. His home was mid sized and white, built in the nineteen forties, but renovated shortly before he and his wife had bought it, ten years ago. His wife, Cynthia, had been pregnant at the time with Megan, and the apartment they had first moved into after their marriage seemed suddenly, too claustrophobic and small when a crib had been introduced, and then a changing table, dressers, clothes and toys, and all of the things they had received at the baby shower. They had found this house in Loveland, and it was perfect for them. To the East, fields for as long as you could see, until they dipped slightly, rolling down over the horizon to the large home of the family that owned them. West, about half a football field away, the Reeds only close neighbors. A grand three story house painted a soft blue, like a robin's egg shell. An elderly couple lived there, Elliot and Clara Walters. They were in their seventies, retired and hating it, two cats and a small dog filling a small part of the void left to parents who had had ten children, none of whom lived closer than a seven hour drive. Across the street from the Reeds residence, more of those glorious fields.. Behind the house, a few acres of short green grass, which gave way to woods, nothing but dark and twisted shapes here so early in the morning. Sam had an obscene image flash behind his eyes as he opened his car door, looking back at the woods. For a second, the trees were like fingers, crippled and clawed, reaching up, out of the ground, as if to tear heaven from the skies.
Sam was middle management for a trucking company. He, had his own office with a nice view of the parking lot, and had seven people who answered to him. He made good money, His wife worked from home, a few hours a day, writing articles for a website. They had never exactly struggled. Until this year. The trucking industry was one of the hardest hit because of the economy, and as Christmas neared, Sam had taken a job at a major retail chain doing part time overnight stocking. On days he worked his night job, he would go to sleep as soon as he got home from his day job, around six or so. He awoke at midnight, showered, at a quick meal, and was pulling out of his driveway around one fifteen, a duffel bag with business casual clothes to change into at the office on the passenger seat beside him. He worked until six in the morning, and then went straight over to the office.
The car dipped to the right side slightly as Sam backed out onto the road, missing the last inch or so of his driveway catching the lip of the ditch in his yard. His headlights swung across his side yard, running along the grass like a spreading flame, meeting the side of the Walters home, and climbing along the paneling. The lights hit a kitchen window, and for a second, Sam was looking straight at the face of a man. The lights hadn't just plunged through the window, clearly showcasing the small cuckoo clock hanging opposite on the wall, as they normally did. In fact, he hadn't seen the clock at all, with it's small waving bar, ticking away the minutes until dawn. No, this time, the lights had illuminated a face, one that Sam was sure didn't belong to Elliot or Clara. It was a strange face, a pale face, a wicked face. Sam blinked, from surprise, and when his eyes opened again in no time at all, the face was gone. Sam sat in the middle of the road, his car diagonally across both lanes, the headlights still spilling intrusively into his neighbors kitchen. Sam sat a long time, not sure of what he had seen. Should he do something? Should he go over and check if his kindly old neighbors were being robbed? Should he call the police? Sitting in the cold, the engine idly pumping visible exhaust into the air, Sam decided he hadn't seen what he thought he had, and he drove on down the street.
*
The store Sam worked at at night had locks on a timer. They would not open until five minutes before two, and it was ten minutes before two now, and he had to sit in his car, waiting to get in. He had driven without the radio on, something very rare for him. He had thought of nothing but that face, with it's cold dark eyes, brows slanting down on top of them, two small dark snakes on an otherwise white background. The lips were turned downwards in a frown, no more like a snarl. “This is ridiculous!” Sam spoke aloud to himself, fingers finding the dial to the heater and turning it a few clicks down. There was no way Sam could have seen the face that clearly, no way he could have seen the position of the eyebrows, what sort of emotion the face displayed. There was no way of telling if it hadn't been either one of this neighbors. Or even if the face had been there at all. But It had been, and it had been a terrible, wicked, and deadly face. Sam knew it.
“Hey Sam.” Nathanial stood in front of the time clock, carefully punching his numbers in as Sam stepped by him.
“Hey.” Sam slid his coat off his shoulders and hung it on a hanger on the rack. He turned to Nathanial. 'What's going on?”
“Not much, had a hell of a test today, I'm beginning to rethink this whole college thing.”
“I had plenty of those days too.” Sam grinned as he moved to the time clock. “But look at me now.”
What Sam, Nathanial, and twenty or so other two a. m. folk did was empty a truck every night. A truck only arrived two or three days a week in most months, but every day but Sunday the week of Thanksgiving until Christmas. Two people would enter the truck, lifting them to a long line made up of rollers. The boxes were slid down and placed onto various skids. As skids reached their maximum height, “bowlers” took them to the floor and bowled them out. This consisted of finding the correct aisle from the label and sliding them down to the correct section of shelf space. After all of this, the rest of their work time was taken up by moving through the sections of the store, one person to an aisle, and putting the product on the shelves.
The team stocked in the small grocery aisles, Sam kneeling in front of the cooler, pulling out bottles of orange juice, sliding the ones with a further sell by date in, and then replacing the removed ones. He stood and stepped back, letting he door swing shut on it's hinges. Sam gasped and jerked away from the door. He spun quickly around, looking back into an aisle. He had sworn he saw the wicked face, leering behind him, reflected in the glass door. “What's the matter?” Gus spoke, an older man working in the aisle.
“Nothing.” Sam answered, tossing the cardboard box the orange juice had come in in his trash cart. Gus shrugged and stood, Sam unable to tell if the groan that came from Gus was from, his mouth or his knees. Sam turned back to the cooler, eyes scanning for the face. He put a hand to his face, and was startled to find he was sweating. His fingers came back slick and warm, and he wiped them off on his pants. He left his trash cart along the cooler and made his way to the bathroom. After making sure the door was locked, Sam stepped to the sink, hesitantly. He felt foolish when he realized he moved so slowly because he was half sure he would see the face reflected in the mirror, peering over his shoulder. The mirror was empty, besides Sam's own face, red and wet, making Sam absurdly picture a tomato, sprinkled with a morning rain, set atop his shoulders. Sam turned the faucet on, keeping the water cool, letting it flow over his palms and fingers for a moment before forming his hands into a diamond shaped bowl. He leaned forward and splashed the water onto his face. Sam stayed bent, turning the water off and held his eyes closed as the waters streamed from his face at first, and then lessened to droplets, pattering against the porcelain. Sam remained stooped, even after no more drops fell from his skin. He kept his eyes closed. Once again, he was sure that, as he stood up, in the mirror the wicked face would greet him. Sam took a deep breath and straightened up. He opened his eyes. Nothing.
Sam got through the rest of his late shift without seeing the face in anything other than his mind. It was never far from there. He thought of it as he stocked, he thought of it as he folded boxes down and slid them into the baler, he thought of it on his break. Every minute he was thinking of that face. Of that pale, terrible face. Sam changed for his day job in the office bathroom, carefully avoiding looking into the mirror. He stepped from the bathroom with the duffel slung over one shoulder. The office was dark, and empty. The only light came from a few computers in various cubicles, whose screens burned with that somehow bright black. A few people always forgot to turn their monitors off. Sam was an hour early on days he worked his night job, but what was the point of going home if he had to turn around and go right back out again? He walked to his office, unlocking it and letting himself in. He left the door open, fingers finding the light switch and flipping it up. He barely heard that soft buzz as the fluorescents kicked on, and it seemed his eyes were more accustomed to their harsh glow than a natural one. Sam dropped his duffel in the corner behind his desk and sat down, rubbing his eyes with his knuckles. He turned on his computer, and got to work.
*